Listen to Camille’s critique

Scene:

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My study:

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Camille’s adjustments:

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Key points:

Need to use more saturated colour.

Shadow of the yellow block should be a bit cooler.

She used dark yellow ochre for the shadow of the jug, with a bit of pale green.

Winsor red and permenant madder deep for light and dark of red block.

Shadows need to be darker, especially of the white cylinder.

Scene:

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My study:

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Camille’s adjustments:

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Key points:

Generally good.

More saturated colour on the red block in light.

Emphasise lights and shadows even more.

Darker on the white cylinder.

Camille used orange for the blue block in light because she had already used pink on the cloth and comparing the 2 colours the blue block had more yellow in it than the cloth.

Yellow block should be cooler.

Jug had a bit of green in it in shadow.

Scene:

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My study:

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Camille’s adjustments:

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Key points:

More saturated colour.

Neutralised the back purple colour.

Darker shadows especially on the white cylinder.

Things to take forward for this week’s studies